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Do you know why I do not speak?
Do you know why my thoughts from you I keep?
My true feelings hide
Locked away not so deep inside
If you looked you’d see
My eyes reveal all of me
If you knew I’m really vulnerable within
What would you think of me then?
If you knew all I want is protection
Would you look at me with some satisfaction?
Smile to yourself knowing
Through all the strength I’ve been showing
I tried
I lied
I failed
I cried
©2004-2009 ~fallenangelcries
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got pic from [link] and played with it in photoshop

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:iconpsychoshortie:
uh...kidd...this is what i am telling u bout...don't make me have to come to DA to find out what i need to know to really know u...funny tho how i knew coming here would give me some insight...but yeah...just be frank sometimes...u don't need a poetic license to tell me and everyone else how u feel...and keeping it pent up and helping either...for anyone...but yeah...good poem anyway...nice rhyme scheme
:iconmtheadbangers:
yea, sorry about all that, and in regards to cam's comment, pent up rage really helps if you play football.
:iconevildeathpenguin:
*points to Holcomb's comment* She plays soccer which is just about as brutal : )

Darling you know we love you. I honestly didn't know about any pre-made plans for friday, but that doesn't mean we can't do anything. We can see a movie and eat at like waffle house or whatever. We're only busy until like 6:30 and then we can all hang out. You know we want you there!!!

As for the poem, it's really good! The rhyming is nice and it flows well.

The picture is pretty too! You did a good job!

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I got an idea, an idea so smart my head would explode if I even began to know what I was talking about.
:iconfallenangelcries:
yeh and when i do tell u stuff u either laugh at/ mock me or ignore me

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Mile upon mile got no direction
We're all playin the same game
We're all lookin for redemption
Just to pray to say the name
So caught up now in pretendin
That what we're seekin is the truth
Im just lookin for a happy endin
All Im lookin for is you
-Rascal Flatts
:iconfallenangelcries:
i dunno... im not allowed to stay out late ne more

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Mile upon mile got no direction
We're all playin the same game
We're all lookin for redemption
Just to pray to say the name
So caught up now in pretendin
That what we're seekin is the truth
Im just lookin for a happy endin
All Im lookin for is you
-Rascal Flatts
:iconevildeathpenguin:
If we catch a flick at 7ish, then you can get home by like 10:30

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I got an idea, an idea so smart my head would explode if I even began to know what I was talking about.
:iconfallenangelcries:
i still promised jason i would see him

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Mile upon mile got no direction
We're all playin the same game
We're all lookin for redemption
Just to pray to say the name
So caught up now in pretendin
That what we're seekin is the truth
Im just lookin for a happy endin
All Im lookin for is you
-Rascal Flatts
:iconevildeathpenguin:
Could you seem him before the movie?

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I got an idea, an idea so smart my head would explode if I even began to know what I was talking about.
:iconeviltwinskippy:
love picture!!!


the poem flows, good rhymes.

very deep.... yeah.

:hug:

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~**~Be proud
Be unique
Don't apoligize
Don't regret~**~

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