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Commentary from an Outsider
Inaudible whispers from a Friend
Do you really believe the messages you send?

Ever observing Bystanders
Abide simple inviolable rules of verity
Do you question their validity?

Trusted Companions
Show you your white light
Do you see their bias doesn’t make it quite right?

You only know what They’ve taught you
What they say is real
Do you ever think to follow what you feel?

Your Group watches you closely
I know you from afar
Do you ever ask yourself who your true friends are?
©2004-2009 ~fallenangelcries
:iconfallenangelcries:

Author's Comments

yeh so this is part two i opted for poetry rather than prose cause this came to me as (much of my stuff does) at a random point tonite
so this can have an easy interpretation for all you lazy folks out there, or for the more adventuresome you can try to read into it and see how it plays out in your life. if you do decide to do this please either tell me or leave it in your comment
well here it is...

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:iconeviltwinskippy:
very nice.... stuff going on?

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~**~Be proud
Be unique
Don't apoligize
Don't regret~**~
:iconperfectimperfection:
very nice and I understand where its coming from! very well written....YAY :hug:

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What would I pay

To stay here beside you?

What would I do to see you

Smiling at me?
:iconfallingobsession:
:hug: i love you kari, and i love the poem/prose thing too. i can understand. :hug:

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